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And I shattered when you told me you were lying,
And I cried because I knew it was a fake,
And I ached when I would think about it,
And I fell accepting my mistake.

And I failed when I looked into your eyes,
And I lost because I knew it was the end,
And I broke because I thought you were the one,
And I was ruined because I knew it was pretend.

And I was finished when we said our last goodbye,
And I gave in acting like it was okay,
And I surrendered when you started to laugh,
And I died as I watched you walk away.
©2005-2009 ~donskytalia
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:iconeternallydejected:
WOW!!!! This is an amazing piece :) I love it so much :D

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:icondonskytalia:
Wow!
Thank you so, so much.
I really apprecitate any comment but yours is special.
Thanks a ton for the favorite on it as well!

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Tali
:iconbidujador:
and I liked your poem when I read it....
....but it's sad though TT___TT

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:iconsabretooth-fox:
cool poem

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:iconchibifred:
It's very good

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:iconeternallydejected:
You are more than welcome. When I read this poem I fell in love with it straight away. It is just amazing :)

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:icondonskytalia:
Ahhhh wow.
You make me smile.

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